Found a couple of small errors in the text that could be easily rectified.
1) In the second paragraph, it is mentioned that the cost of the tour covers various aspects, including transport, food, lodging etc. This fact is repeated further down in paragraph 4 with bulleted list of points. This repetition can be eliminated – reduce the duplicate text, make it simpler for the reader – (Lean, applied to writing) 🙂
2) In paragraph 5, it says “We speak Japanese speakers will be your guides…” – please correct this.
3) The last paragraph, again, is a repetition of para 3
I fully agree that the main message of this page is clear and well-articulated. Though minor in nature, these little things leave a little bit of unsavory experience. Corrections could improve the impact of the text on the reader.
Thank you very much for helping us improve our advertising copy! If you find anything else, please let us know.
I am Italian and I am interested to join the tour in Japan. Recommendations for the logistics of the trip from Italy to Japan? I would like to know if some other Italian participate in the tour to travel together.
Would also be interesting to know in advance which will be visited factories.
Thank you for your reply
You are the first Italian to inquire. When others do, we will let you know. If you booked your flights now from Rome or Milan to Nagoya on 4/19, with return from Tokyo on 4/26, you could get flights with one stop in each direction for $800 to $1,200. As these prices will be difficult to beat, even as a group rate, my recommendation would to be to book your flight early, as an individual.
The appointments at the plants are already made. We do not publish the details of each factory on the blog to protect our hosts’ privacy. They are, however, available to the participants.
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